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Old 16.05.2012, 20:50   #1
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Daumen hoch Origin of DarkOrbit - ~Dark Reborn~

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Gorlana began prepping for any invasions by the Kristallons, they have ways of following ships back to their planet...which is why there are so many Alien planets and only so many human planets. Out of the 12 planets, only 2 was inhabited by humans, and they fought to keep it that way. General Cosandra knew this would not be the last they deal with with Kristallonians...a big battle was soon to come, the General did not sit around day by day awaiting it, she took it very very very...Seriously...
The tale of Dark Reborn

It is 9:40 pm, December 34th, the day the Orbit of Light becomes a Darker Orbit. The year is 1454, 4 years since contact with the Greeders of Greed Planet and also the lost of a Great Captain: Grenhow. It was 4 years of pain and preperations, Pestel was a close friend of Grenhow and Cosandra was a friend of his parents. Though they had no time to sit in pain and cry it out til another day, They had to prepare for war, a war that Started the legend of Dark Orbit, wether more people were to die or lose love ones, they had to fight for their lives, their beleifs, their Family and Friends, and their very own Existance in the Universe.

On Greed planet, it was a disturbing place to be, very little of everything needed to survive, it was like a junk yard in form of a junk planet. Metal scraps every where and gashes of shoocking wires every where gave the planet a spark of twinkle twinking lights. It was a smoky habitat, a bliss of darkness and lurking in it are people that are up to no good. There was no leader, no dictator, no one to say how when and where what will be done, if there was to be a leader on this Unforgiven planet, a reason wouldnt be needed, because all of them looked for some one to use. There were only two types of people that lived on this planet, those who want to live and those who didn't care wether they were alive or dead, these were the ones that would stir up trouble with the Aliens causing the Solar System to be troubled with Aliens. At the end of the day it would be Gorlana's space Pilost to clear the sky and make sure there are no Aliens Disturbing the peace.

As for the Ones on Greed planet that tried to escape and live a better life, worked together to escape the trenches of Greed planet and maybe be accepted on Gorlana. Not everyone on Greed planet had intentions of Greed, or the heart to hurt others and steal because they wanted to, some were peaceful people and wanted the best out of life, how did it come to the fact that they live on such a bad planet...only answer available is abduction. Greeders would abduct Space Pilots on Gorlana and take them back to their planet to work for their lives. Even Children would be abducted, the Greeders didn't care, they would raise them to be just like them, after years they would grow up forgetting their true real home, the one that they were going to war with, and destroy.

Already the Greeders had Fleets of ships ready to Infiltrate and wage a winning war, sadly for them this war wasn't going to be won by neither them or Gorlana, Space wars can cause a disturbance in space and fracture stars around them, where this war was heading was in the realm of a new Era, the Era of Dark Reborn, The Beginning of a new way of life and Survival.. At 10pm, it is time for war, at this time loads of fleets of Pirate looking ships could be seen far away heading towards Gorlana, Gorlana's Sattelite picked up the wave feed...it was more than they could have imagined. From this point its time to jump into their Cock-Pit and start up their Engines, war is upon us.

"Get ready Pilots, this is the war of a lifetime, So fight brave and remember, We fight for whats right!! GOO!!", at the end of that little talk, ships started to blast off into the sky launching straight into space, Lasers could be seen moving like lightening and Sounded like Thunder above the clouds. There were over thousands of ships launched, Piloting those ships are almost entirely every one on Gorlana, Ships were fast and flying at deadly speeed. The Greeders had alot of power over the Army of Gorlana, more than needed to own space. it seemed that the Greeders Knew how to go about this war, they had technology slightly different than Gorlana's, They could Shoot a rocket that slowed down their enemies. they had HellStorm Rockers like Gorlana. Their ships were incredibly built, it was way more than Gorlana had ever in their life expected. the war went on for hours, Ships could be seen falling out of the sky crashing on the planets being engolfed by the massive war. Ofcourse this wasn't apart of anyones plans, This disturbance to the Aliens was all it took to turn the war into something more. Already Aliens could be seen coming from their planets engaging in the war, this was a big Minus for the Greeders, Kristallons started to fly into the war, other aliens like Streuners and Lordakias joined, The Lordakias had a mother ship known as the Lordakium, big squid looking ships with Enough Fire power to blow up ships to pieces. Still more and more Aliens got attracted to the war, Saimons, Sibalonians as well as little sibs, Mordons along with Devoloriums. This was all it took to make it a war of total human inihalation.

There was another Alien ship that caused everything yo get ugly, It's called the Cubikon. This was a A Alien ship with Progites onboard like fleets, over 30 of them enough to gang you and pop you. The Cubikon planet was infested with many of these Aliens, they could recreate themselves within seconds. The war was already looking scares enough, to really tip the iceburg, The Sun was reaching its limit, it was about to self Destruct within a few minutes. General Cosandra knew this was going to happen, she knew that she had to have a way out for the Survival of her people. A year ago she ordered for a creation of three base space stations. It would be a backup Escape out of the war if it was to get messy, which it already did, she had already lost thousands of Comrads, Friends and this was enough for her. She put up a great fight against Cubes and the Greeders, her ship, was already about to crack. Pestel stayed close to her through out the war, he made sure she wasn't hurt, he did well, but it was time for a plan B.

Cosandra Ordered Pestel to Head back to Gorlana's Main Operating Station and request that everyone prepate for Evacuation. The countdown in her ships clock had just 15 minutes left before the sun was to blow up. Pestel did not question her, he headed to the Main Operating Station like he was ordered and did was he was told. as he flew to the Operating Station, there were Greeders on the planet tormenting everyone, he fought them off as best as he can, his bravery was a 19V1, 19 Greeders VS him alone, he put up one heck of a fight, he managed to kill them all. but his ship got seriously damaged. he head into the Hangar and crashed, he jumped out of his ship and ran as fast as he can to the Operating Station, when he reached there was a Greeder inside messing with the Controls, Cosandra called into his Portable Radio and requested that he Soound the Evacuation now, there was ony minutes left before BOOM. He took out his Laser Gun and shot the Greeder in his back, he fell on the floor, he rushed to the Controls and Sounded the alarm. Everyone started to board the Base Stations and slipped into a Pod. Pestel tried to get back to his ship and go back to help Cosandra, but then she Said to him on his Radio, "Pestel, this is an Order, Do not come back up here, go onto the Base Station and help them escape". Pestel couldn't leave her so easy, he knew she would be killed, "I can't so that, i have to come back and help you, i can't leave you behind", Cosandra:. "Stop talking madness, the sun is about to blow up in 4 minutes, you better get your but on the base station with the others, and thats an Order". Pestel couldnt help but feel sad and upset inside, he knows that this could be the last he sees her, the one he has had a crush on for years. but he listened to her, and did what he was told, because either way, he nothing more but respect and Love for General Cosandra.

He rushed to one of the Base Station pods, and locked himself in, The base station was ready to launch, already less than a minute before the Sun Explodes, the war stretched wide into space, Pestel felt even worse than he felt losing his best Friend, now losing the one he loves is another pain to deal with. Gorga stayed with her fighting off a what seemed to be a pointless battle, but they were fighting to make sure that the Three Base Stations had time to launch and so that the greeders wouldn't interfere with the launching. it was the least that they oculd do, Ofcourse Cosandra knew this may have been the result of the war, but she felt comforted inside, knowing that Pestel is Alive, she can trust him with the life of her people. She Admired him more than he Admired her, it was her little Secret to herself that she loved him. she always thought it was cute how he shows his love to her. At this point, The three Base space station launched off, reaching light years away from the Explosion, it was death for life and Bravery for the future. Aslong as there was some source of life, Survival was worth it, and it was, even though The war of Dark Reborn brought an end to millions of lives and an end to the General of the Three Companies, it was worth it. The Orbit of Lite May have turned into a Dark Orbit, But the life that was within the Orbit was all the light needed to keep the peace.

It's 2007, 553 years later since the War. There has been 8 Generals for the Companies: EIC -Earth Industrial Corporation, VRU - Venus Resources Unlimited and MMO, Mars Mining Operations. They eached took on the footsteps of the Historical past Generals, Cosandra and Pestel. Each General would live or be General for a Maximum of 69 years. Few Generals would most likely die at the age 69, it's developed consperecy amongs the three Companies. It is the year of a new General, His name is Fisher Polati. The old General was killed in a tragic Space Fight, which some how brought up a war amongs the three Companies. The Dark Orbit Council Ordered for peace, but peace was already starting to fall apart, along with the three Companies. After Fisher Recieved the Certificate of leadership to take control as General over the thre companies, he was requested by the Council to join a Mandatory meeting. He went to the meeting, and as he entered the room, Silence controlled the atmoshpere.

"Hello General, Thanks for joining the meeting"
Said one of the Councilman. his name was Derek, He sat to the left of the three Council members, he sat next to Athena, and Athena sat next to one of the most feared Councilman, Rigger.

Fisher took a seat infront of the three and asked said slowly. "Great to be here Derek, what's the reason for this meeting?"

Athena: "We have a bit of information to share with you concering the deaths of the past Generals"

Rigger: "It seems that we need to let you know of this before your years of control, if there is anything left to control"

General: "Rigger, i'd like it if you keep that mouth of yours shut" Rigger looked at him with a bit of hate in his eyes, Fisher could see it without looking directly at him.

Athena: " We would like it if you Split the companies Allowing Share power of the the three, It will put your life less on a stick and help the companies keep a Leader" Fisher looked Directly at Derek.

General: "Is that what this is about Derek?...you want the companies to seperate?" - Derek: "It's not what i want General, but if you keep your head over the three then your risking your life" - General:" My life is the reason the three companies havent started a War with each other yet, we have enough Civil wars as it is!" - Derek:" Look we the members of the council have already decided that this is best for our General, and best for the companies".

Athena: " General, With respect, we are not going to allow another careless assissination of our General, We do not need your consent on this, the meeting was just call forth to inform you of our actions"

Rigger: " yes, so if you want to retaliate and lose the ittle bit of right you have so far, be my guest" he said as he smurked

General:" Oh its ok, i just hope the three of you are ready for another war that could bring the peace we have to nothing and let all that our Greatest General fought for be for nothing!"

Derek:" We all know this won't be easy, but its for the best Fisher, This meeting is over"

The three councils got up out of their seats and head through the door, General Fisher looked at Rigger with a hated look, reassuring RIgger that he is keeping his eyes on him. This split up is what lead to better and worse, Clans were formed, People would Switch Companies, Traitors were flowing around stirring up trouble, Back-to-Back PvP battles, Deadly Adventures through space fighting Aliens and Each Company fought to take control, this is what defined DarkOrbit.

Part-1-The Beginning
http://en.board.bigpoint.com/darkorb...d.php?t=441418

Part-2-Dark Reborn
http://en.board.bigpoint.com/darkorb...82#post2675382

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Old 17.05.2012, 15:19   #2
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wow cant u see it is too long for non free people to read -.-
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Old 17.05.2012, 17:19   #3
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wow cant u see it is too long for non free people to read -.-
lol i don't know wether to take that as a joke or a rhetorical question. More will becoming out, and they won't be as long as this or the first, these first two were just meant to be a base for a follow up piece.

I would love to know, How much did you read?, and what do you think of it?.

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Old 17.05.2012, 21:15   #4
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Honestly, this seems quite interesting. But it needs alot of changes. Some parts were hard for me to read because of the nowhere-near-perfect grammar.
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Old 21.05.2012, 17:25   #5
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Honestly, this seems quite interesting. But it needs alot of changes. Some parts were hard for me to read because of the nowhere-near-perfect grammar.
Lol Sorry bout the bad typo's, i was just racing to put this idea out and never paid much attention to spelling and Grammar, but hey!, I'll fix that when i have the time, right now am walking around Forums in my Undies.

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Old 26.05.2012, 21:03   #6
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Old 29.06.2012, 03:28   #8
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Darn fine work, a pleasant, informative and at times exhilarating read. Keep up the great work

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