I think that this is a brilliant story and you have put alot of time and effort into mitt !
Now gecko before you go make comments on other peoples work i'd like to see yours and what you can do, Oh wait i forgot you have not done anything
im being really serious here
write a few more storues and try and get a book of dark orbit short stories published
if this did happen i would buy it
you could make quite a lot of money out of it
Great signiture by ●●●BlackHeartOMG●●●
Signiture takes a while to load but it is epic when it does load.